Tuesday, July 21, 2020

this is my Harold burger.

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3 comments:

  1. Mrs BaileyJuly 21, 2020 at 12:57 PM

    Hi Keepa,

    Thanks for sharing your choices Harold Hamburger it looks nice and bright. I like how you have all 5 parts to the hamburger. A next step is to give a definition for how each of those words help us when making choices.

    Thanks,

    Mrs B.

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  2. LachlanJuly 24, 2020 at 9:41 AM

    Hi, Keepa it's me Lochie. I like how you displayed your burger it is nice and easy to see. A next step would probley be decriding it a little bit better.

    Thanks,

    Lochie

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  3. TomAugust 11, 2020 at 9:45 AM

    I like how you displayed your burger your next step is to put more information in.

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